Social Studies - Addictions to Phones

In social studies, we had to write a paragraph on whether students were addicted to their phones or not. Here is the paragraph I did:

It is impossible to tell if a student is addicted to their phone or not. Whether someone is addicted to their phone depends on who the person is as everyone lives a different life. Although not all students are addicted, those who are could deal with more negative impacts than those who aren’t. A few examples of the negative consequences of using your phone to often include having issues socialising and exercising and your eyesight worsening. These consequences are issues as it affects the health of a student. Even though addictions to a device are not uncommon and are becoming more frequent among teens, I believe it is unfair to assume someone is addicted.